I wrote the missing fight scene. Which turned out to be a lot of dialogue so it may need rewriting in the third draft. I’m going to pass copies to a few friends now to see what they think.
I’ve also decided to cut the accents off the name so it’s easier to figure out how it’s pronounced. So its now officially called Arædan.
With Arædan done I think I should take a look at the novel I started writing next year and sort out the Herring port problem so I can get the story back to the intrigue and action.