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Mrs H.'s Knitting Circle – Fixing the Wandering Tense

Wednesday, February 6th, 2008

I’ve been making some corrections to Mrs H.’s Knitting Circle tonight. One section wandered into the present tense while the rest of the story is pretty much solid past tense. Reading it again the present tense added to the drama – well that’s my excuse and I’m sticking to it. It didn’t fit with the rest of the story so I’ve fixed it. A few other corrections were needed. I also finaly named the eponymous electron jockey from the first story in the serial – he is now Mr Theodore Sparks. A bad joke I know but I’m writing pulp not lit-fic.

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